Feedback:
- Colour palate is nice
- The text isn't right for that vertical format (try creating your own font, research fonts, and positions) Maybe have 'Fall' slightly diagonal from left to right
- Too much negative space at the bottom right (look into subtle textures, imagery etc to put in there) (butterfly texture??)
- Alexandria is a positive and naive character (look at re-positioning her head to look up at the architecture, put her head lower in the lower right corner)
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